A Christmas Eve Story 01
December 13th, 2006
Casting a quick glance at the twin's bedroom door, she said in an undertone, "It's not as if they don't have enough presents, Jason. If you're so set on getting this for them, why don't you wrap up a picture of it under the tree and tell them that you'll all be going out to pick it up together later. You can make a special day of it."
With a negligent wave of his hand, Jason rejected her suggestion.
Brandee swallowed the ball of resentment that was building in her throat. At the foot of the stairs, she grasped his shoulder and turned him around to face her. "Honey, I know you feel guilty for being away on business so much this year but getting the boys a Playstation…well, I'm sure they'd much rather have you home today."
Jason started back at her for a moment before he said, "Brandee, please let me do this. It'd make me feel better knowing—"
She threw up her hands. "How can you be so selfish? It's not about you! It's about the boys. They want their father home on Christmas Eve."
His eyes hardened and the muscles of his jaw clenched before he once again turned his back on her. "I'll call you if I'm running late," he said as he opened the back door and then slammed it shut behind him.
As she watched his retreating back through the backdoor window, a scream of frustration rose in her chest but before it had a chance to build it was smothered by a familiar wave of disappointment. He hadn't even tried to kiss her good-bye. And it wasn't the first time that he'd neglected to do so. In fact, besides the greeting peck on the lips she received whenever he returned from one of his numerous business trips, their physical intimacy had been almost nonexistent lately.
With a sigh, she turned from the door and headed into the kitchen. She might as well get breakfast started and try to think of some excuse to tell the boys as to why their father was once again missing out on a special day.
"G'morning, sexy," drawled a voice behind her.
Brandee jumped, almost dropping her tray, and turned around to find Saena strolling in the kitchen.
"Geez, Saena. You scared me to death." Brandee set the ingredients she'd gathered from the fridge on a nearby counter. "I didn't even hear you come down the stairs."
Saena shrugged as she entered the kitchen. "I'm sneaky. It's my special skill."
Brandee laughed.
"Plus, you looked deep in thought. Are you okay?"
21 Responses to “A Christmas Eve Story 01”
December 13th, 2006 at 7:11 pm
An excellent start, Kara! Holy crap you blow me away with all these mad skills. I don't know what you do to your screens, but they come out extremely crisp and flawless looking.
I love this kind of story–does that make me an awful person? Tension in stories is aces. Especially when they involve smokin' hot pixels like Jason!
Glad to see your writing juices are flowing again. 😀
December 13th, 2006 at 11:03 pm
Wow, I am *very* impressed! Not that I wasn't before, but seriously, the pictures and the way your writing flows..it's amazing! I'm in love with your graphics card, haha. Hopefully someday I'll be able to upgrade my computer. (My graphics card isn't bad, but sometimes it randomly blurs things and it gets tedious.)
I can't wait for the rest!
December 14th, 2006 at 3:53 am
When you talked about having the Ramseys host a christmas party, I only imagined a photo shoot, maybe with a couple commentaries. I wasn't expecting an actual story, with marital drama and everything. This is so much better!
Also, I love how you put so many details in your sets, like frost on the boys' window, and christmas tiny objects all around the house. It add realism to your story. And Saena is gorgeous. It was so nice to finally "meet" her. 😉
Now I'll sit still and wait for part 2. How many chapters have you planned?
December 14th, 2006 at 8:31 am
Mao: Thank you! I didn't really do too much to the pictures. I just brightened them (used "clarify" in PSP) a little—they are always a little dark straight from the game as I use the Radiance Lighting Mod.
Anyway, I like this sort of story too. It's fun to put my characters through the emotional wringer. Oh, yes. I'm evil. 😈
Alicia: Thank you! I got a little blurring of my graphics card this time around too. But I'm pretty sure it was because at one point in the shoot I increased the viewing distance from my lot to "extra large" (or whatever the measurement is). After I reduced the viewing distance to "small" and restarted the game I didn't have any further problems. Usually, I can run my game at "medium" or "large" viewing distance (depending on the lot and the surrounding neighborhood, but this lot is fairly big and I have a ton of knick-knacks in the cabin.
Dektora: hehe Yeah, I wasn't planning on having this big of a story. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. There are a total of four parts. I initially had five but one of them didn't make the cut. I probably should have cut out sections of the second part, but then Alec would have ended up on the cutting floor. I guess Alec is my gratuitous male this time around, but that's okay his part in the story is really fun and it does give a little depth to Saena's character. Oh, I hope I didn't say too much. 😉
December 14th, 2006 at 9:01 am
OMG! That was so utterly fantastic that now I can't wait for the next chapter. I really love what you have done with their house, and I think the decor is lovely too. I can't wait for this next Holiday Expansion…only 11 more days to go!
And the twins are gorgeous, I love them already! 😀 Shame on Jason, leaving the family on Christmas Eve. Can't wait to see how this ends out.
December 14th, 2006 at 6:31 pm
Holy cats, I tried out that Radiance mod you mentioned… and it's AMAZING! My overly expensive graphic card actually acts like one in The Sims 2 now. Thanks so much… why didn't I get this earlier?? It's tempting to re-take all the pictures for my backlog… but I think I'll hold off.
December 14th, 2006 at 8:59 pm
Loved it! as always….you are my inspiration for my own story at sc2……thanks so much, sorry, hope that didn't sound cheesy………..anyway, the lumpy snow? where is it from?? thanks again, I look forward to chapter 2.
December 14th, 2006 at 10:09 pm
Saena's a flirty little thang! Now I'm worried for Hale. LOL! This story is gonna be Mm Mm Good! As always, I'll be eagerly awaiting what happens next.
December 14th, 2006 at 11:49 pm
Kara, your genius never ceases to amaze me. Truly.
December 15th, 2006 at 5:46 am
Wow, when you said Christmas story, I was thinking more along the lines of lovey dovey niceness. But whoa was I wrong. I like it though, it makes sense. Boy would I love to have a Playstation. But probably not at the expense of a happy mom. But then again, they are kids. But they would want a happy mom of course. Saena is very pretty. And I can't wait to see the visitors. Maybe one of them..hopefully not Tahlvin, will get with Saena. But maybe she already has a boyfriend in Japan.
December 15th, 2006 at 5:47 am
Oh, and where did you get the stuff to decorate the cabin? Is it from an expansion pack or is it downloadable? Thanks
December 15th, 2006 at 8:14 am
Amalinaball: I love the twins too. I actually fixed them up a bit in Body Shop. I gave them Jason's skin (because I thought they looked better with it), and touched up their faces ever so slightly (the children's faces anyway, when they become adults, they'll be back to their original faces). I only tweaked their faces because they had really thin lips and recessive chins…Sim genetics is weird sometimes. I aged them to adults to see if they looked as freaky there, but luckily they are both adorable adults and they aren't as identical as I first thought either.
Mao: Awesome! I'm glad I could turn you on to it. There are a few things that I don't like about it (e.g. the shadows are weird outside and the outside lighting is a bit bright), but on the whole I think it's one of my favorite mods for the game.
Jenny: Thank you! I'm honored. 😀 As for the snow, do you mean how it looks like it's in drifts? I actually just raised the terrain unevenly here and there to get that effect. For the snowy look, I used scarletqueenkat's snow neighborhood, but you can also use a snowy terrain paint. I hope that helped!
Alimah Kali: Hale has new hairstyle since you last saw him—it's a bit shorter now—but he still looks mighty sexy. I hope you like it! 😉 And, yes, Saena is a "flirty little thang." hehe You pegged her right away.
Jade: *big wave* Yay! Hi, Jade! And, thank you! You're so sweet.
Eva: Oh, I'm sure Saena does have a boyfriend (or two…or three…or four…hehe…just kidding) back in Japan, but it's been a while since she's been around American guys. 😉 And, yes, most of the Christmas decorations are from the Holiday Stuff pack, but I also got some of them from the Featured Artists' Happy Holidays section at TSR. I really had too much fun decorating the house. I went all out. You probably won't even get to see all the rooms I decorated. haha
December 16th, 2006 at 6:02 am
Saena is so pretty! I love her hair too. Is that a futon she was sleeping on? Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
December 16th, 2006 at 9:10 am
Azrielle: Saena thanks you! 😉 And, she's sleeping on a sofa bed. I got it from TSR (almost all the way down the page). It matches one of the in-game loveseats so that if you switch it out, you can pretend that your sim pulled out the bed for the night. I decided to do that because Saena is actually staying in the den; it can be converted into a guest room via the sofa bed. 🙂
December 16th, 2006 at 11:10 am
I can't wait to see more of the story, Kara. I'm completely intrigued already. And what would the holidays be without some family angst? =P
December 17th, 2006 at 5:23 pm
Ok, ok… Just looked at Hale and Tahlvin's profile s again for good measure and I'm happy to say that I no longer feel afraid for Hale when he meets Saena. Tahlvin, on the other hand, may just meet his match in the "Sexy Flirt" department. I don't know how this story will unfold, but for now I feel much better. 😛
As for Hale with shorter hair… Hmm… As much as I love a long-haired man, I don't think it'll be a huge deal if his hair got a bit shorter. I'll just have to wait and see. ;D
December 19th, 2006 at 11:06 am
What's a good story without some drama- Christmas or otherwise? 😉 This was a great start and I'm glad you're doing something for the season- it's a nice treat. And thank you for your kind word of thanks for my hack. I'm so glad it's working well for you (and thanks for using my outfit- I get giddy as a school girl when I see my stuff get actually used in movies and stories *chuckle*).
December 20th, 2006 at 9:16 am
Choco: Family angst around the holidays is very fun to write. mwahahaha!
Amilah Kali: Hale likes someone, but I'm not going to reveal it until it comes up in the main storyline. 😉
Decorgal: I'm totally in love with your hack. I've found that I'm using it more than all the other hacks I have for the game. And, now that you've released your sitting conversation hack I can write scenes where my characters are actually sitting down. haha And your outfits are so wonderful. They are something that I'd actually wear in real life and are perfect for Brandee, my sister's sim and my self-Sim as they aren't as outrageous as my other characters.
December 21st, 2006 at 12:45 pm
Gorgeous pics, as always! I am totally drooling over them. And the story is great, too! By the way, thanks for sharing with us your tricks of the trade — I really need to download Decorgal's conversation hack! That would come in sooo handy. I'm off to read Part 2!
January 14th, 2007 at 11:00 am
Great story! Can't wait to hear the rest of it.
April 1st, 2007 at 10:39 am
This was a great story. You are really good at it. Question. Where did you get the cell phone?