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	<title>Comments on: The Monster and the Maiden: Ch. 01, Part II</title>
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		<title>By: xtinabobina</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 01:27:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I really, really like Rafe. he&#039;s got a classy. suave dimeanor that really attracts me.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really, really like Rafe. he&#039;s got a classy. suave dimeanor that really attracts me.</p>
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		<title>By: Beth</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Beth]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Mar 2008 19:52:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I don&#039;t know how you could stop writing descriptively -- kind of like a dog trying to turn into a cat.  Which reminds me I adore the &quot;retractable&quot; line!  Made me laugh out loud!  

Love the shot with the yellow candles on the table, which seem to throw a golden light on the room.

Particularly appreciate the fact that your characters have such distinctive and complex personalities.   Edmond reacts almost like a guy in his late teens or early 20&#039;s -- Rafe, much older.  

Wonderful, again, as usual.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#039;t know how you could stop writing descriptively &#8212; kind of like a dog trying to turn into a cat.  Which reminds me I adore the &#034;retractable&#034; line!  Made me laugh out loud!  </p>
<p>Love the shot with the yellow candles on the table, which seem to throw a golden light on the room.</p>
<p>Particularly appreciate the fact that your characters have such distinctive and complex personalities.   Edmond reacts almost like a guy in his late teens or early 20&#039;s &#8212; Rafe, much older.  </p>
<p>Wonderful, again, as usual.</p>
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		<title>By: E. Black</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 17:29:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It has been so long since I&#039;ve read one of your stories, Kara. My head has been everywhere but here. This is a brilliant little gem.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It has been so long since I&#039;ve read one of your stories, Kara. My head has been everywhere but here. This is a brilliant little gem.</p>
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		<title>By: Kara</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kara]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 07:29:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[&lt;blockquote&gt;I think Edmond severely underestimated Rafe.  His friend is has experience with strange and horrible things after being the bodyguard of Koryll for a few years now.  Rafe was more upset that Edmond didn&#039;t trust him enough.  I&#039;m glad they worked it out though. It&#039;s nice for Edmond to have such a loyal friend.

And thank you very much for the compliment on my writing. :)  I&#039;ve tried to write less descriptively since I have the pictures to take up that burden, but I can&#039;t really seem to be able to write any other way.  haha &lt;/blockquote&gt;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>I think Edmond severely underestimated Rafe.  His friend is has experience with strange and horrible things after being the bodyguard of Koryll for a few years now.  Rafe was more upset that Edmond didn&#039;t trust him enough.  I&#039;m glad they worked it out though. It&#039;s nice for Edmond to have such a loyal friend.</p>
<p>And thank you very much for the compliment on my writing. 🙂  I&#039;ve tried to write less descriptively since I have the pictures to take up that burden, but I can&#039;t really seem to be able to write any other way.  haha </p></blockquote>
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		<title>By: Anghard</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Feb 2008 07:16:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh Goodness. I was almost in tears myself at the end there. I really feel for poor Edmond and I was very surprised at how calmly and rationally Rafe took it. I think he proved himself a truly valuable friend.

You did a fantastic job on showing the conversation through the caps too, although with your writing, I have to say, I wouldn&#039;t have noticed if it had just been the writing. You painted the scene very well and I could picture it clearly. 

The images just enhance what you already have, a beautiful accompaniment to your story.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh Goodness. I was almost in tears myself at the end there. I really feel for poor Edmond and I was very surprised at how calmly and rationally Rafe took it. I think he proved himself a truly valuable friend.</p>
<p>You did a fantastic job on showing the conversation through the caps too, although with your writing, I have to say, I wouldn&#039;t have noticed if it had just been the writing. You painted the scene very well and I could picture it clearly. </p>
<p>The images just enhance what you already have, a beautiful accompaniment to your story.</p>
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